well the melody is good but its too repetitive. what i wouldve done is try and changed the instrument after 2:38 but still keep the melody so its more variation. and then maybe add some fx here and there like "swooosh" and stuff like that ya know
Thanks. I'll try to make my melody a bit more varied!
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